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"Tornadoes" is a poem about how Moss envies a tornado and why she does. It is using personification to compare tornadoes to a person Moss wants to be. I chose this poem because it is a good example of an Extended Metaphor. Tornadoes
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"Raising a Humid Flag "is a poem about women. They are ageing now. It is telling about what they do and how they think. I chose this poem because I thought that it was a good example of a narative. Raising The Humid Flag
Enough women over thirty are
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One For All Newborns They kick and flail like crabs on their backs.
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. It tells about the relationship that mother and daughter have. Also how that relationship ch ears. As
they both get
One For All Newborns: A mothers legacy
Then the dark succession of constricting years, /mother competing with
daughter for beauty and losing, /varicose veins and hot-water bottles, joy
boiled away, /the arrival of knowledge that eyes are birds with clipped
wings, /the sun at a 30° angle and unable to go higher, parents/ who cannot
push anymore, who stay by the window/looking for signs of spring.” In the
quote above Moss gives us an idea of what she is going through, as she is
getting older. Not doing as much, ageing both mentally and physically. As
she is getting older her daughter is also growing. She is growing into a
woman. The woman that her daughter has become is more than the mother. Moss
is saying that she is ageing and as she ages her child grows. Also she talks
about death, and how she has treated God when she says “I treated God
badly also; he is another parent…” She is getting older and is beginning to
see that her time is running low. Her daughter is only a reminder of that.
In one line Moss says, “My daughter is just like me.” Her daughter is
growing up too. She treats Moss in the same manner that Moss treated her own
mother. Her mother is now older, and her time is also running out for her
mother. Moss is reminded of this in everything. She sees it in the
propellers on the plane, and also in her own ageing. Moss is also seeing God
as a parent now. A parent “ Searching for signs of spring.” Thylias Moss is
using a narrative. She is telling about life from her point of view. First
the poem is from the point of view of a mother, then in the end the mother
ages into an old woman. It is the story of her life, and the story of all
our lives, as they turn out in the end.
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