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This poem reminded me of the many other views in the world, and of how many things change as we age.
The title also particularly caught my interest because it made me think of a different meaning than the
poem gives out.
Grackles, Goodbye --Robert Penn Warren Black of grackles glints purple as, wheeling in sun-glare,
The flock splays away to pepper the blueness of distance.
Soon they are lost in the tracklessness of air.
I watch them go. I stand in my trance.
Another year gone. In trance of realization,
I remember once seeing a first fall leaf, flame-red, release
Bough-grip, and seek, through gold light of the season's sun,
Black gloss of a mountain pool, and there drift in peace.
Another year gone. And once my mother's hand
Held mine while I kicked the piled yellow leaves on the lawn
And laughed, not knowing some yellow-leaf season I'd stand
And see the hole filled. How they spread their obscene fake lawn.
Who needs the undertaker's sick lie
Flung thus in the teeth of Time, and the earth's spin and tilt?
What kind of fool would promote that kind of lie?
Even sunrise and sunset convict the half-wit of guilt.
Grackles, goodbye! The sky will be vacant and lonely
Till again I hear your horde's rusty creak high above,
Confirming the year's turn and the fact that only, only,
In the name of Death do we learn the true name of Love.
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I chose this poem because of the intriguing details used to describe the hawk’s journey. In this poem Warren is looking into the sky and sees a hawk soaring above him. He recalls the hawks journey and relates it to his own life. The extended metaphor between life and the journey also helped to peak my interest.
Evening Hawk---Robert Penn Warren From plane of light to plane, wings dipping through
Geometries and orchids that the sunset builds,
Out of the peak's black angularity of shadow, riding
The last tumultuous avalanche of
Light above pines and the guttural gorge,
The hawk comes.
His wing
Scythes down another day, his motion
Is that of the honed steel-edge, we hear
The crashless fall of stalks of Time.
Look! Look! he is climbing the last light
Who knows neither Time nor error, and under
Whose eye, unforgiving, the world, unforgiven, swings
Into shadow.
Long now,
The last thrush is still, the last bat
Now cruises in his sharp hieroglyphics. His wisdom
Is ancient, too, and immense. The star
Is steady, like Plato, over the mountain.
If there were no wind we might, we think, hear
The earth grind on its axis, or history
Drip in darkness like a leaking pipe in the
cellar.
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Mortal Limits
I saw the hawk ride updraft in the sunset over Wyoming.
It rose from coniferous darkness, past gray jags
Of mercilessness, past whiteness, into the gloaming
Of dream-spectral light above the lazy purity of snow-snags.
There--west--were the Tetons. Snow-peaks would soon be
In dark profile to break constellations. Beyond what height
Hangs now the black speck? Beyond what range will gold eyes see
New ranges rise to mark a last scrawl of light?
Or, having tasted that atmosphere's thinness, does it
Hang motionless in dying vision before
It knows it will accept the mortal limit,
And swing into the great circular downwardness that will restore
The breath of earth? Of rock? Of rot? Of other such
Items, and the darkness of whatever dream
we clutch?
Analytical Paragraph About "Mortal Limits" In "Mortal Limits" Robert Penn Warren articulates the senses a hawk feels when it flies as he watches it from below. Whilst in Wyoming Warren sees a hawk, soaring through the sky, and his imagination hooks onto this hawk, following it through its journeys and seeing through its eyes. Warren shows that every thing has to stop somewhere, and this hawk starts spiraling downward, when it hits, the "Mortal Limit". His understanding of such limits is presented when he states, "having tasted that atmosphere's thinness, does it/ Hang motionless in dying vision before/ It knows it will accept the mortal limit/And swing into the great circular downwardness that will restore". This quote shows that all things have limits; this hawks limitation being the limit to the height it can fly, because, like Warren, it cannot pass the mortal limits in life. When Warren refers to limits not being able to be passed, he could be referring to his own seeing disability. |