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Sample Poetry By Ai
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“Conversation” is about
what Ai thinks death is like. She uses someone that is dead to describe what
death is like in an extended metaphor. Her words riddle you into
interpreting your own meaning of death but describes in a universal
meaning. An image that stuck with me was how she compared death to the
tearing of a dress. That is an excellent metaphor to the unexpectedness and
swiftness of death. I chose this poem because what she says in her
writing describes what I would think death would kind of be like. Conversation By Ai
We smile at each other and I lean back against the wicker couch. How does it feel to be dead? I say. You touch my knees with your blue fingers. And when you open your mouth, a ball of
yellow light falls to the floor and burns a hole through it. Don't tell me, I say. I don't want to hear. Did you ever, you start, wear a certain kind of dress and just by accident, so inconsequential you barely notice it, your fingers graze that dress and you hear the sound of a knife cutting paper, you see it too and you realize how that image is simply the extension of another image, that your own life is a chain of words that one day will snap. Words, you say, young girls in a circle, holding hands, and beginning to rise heavenward in their confirmation dresses, like white helium balloons, the wreathes of flowers on their heads spinning, and above all that, that's where I'm floating, and that's what it's like only ten times clearer, ten times more horrible. Could anyone
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“The Kid” by Ai
is about how a psychopathic kid kills his own family and then goes to see
the world. "The Kid" addresses some major issues about mental health in young
people in today’s society. I chose this poem because it shows the horror
and harsh but truthful writings Ai uses. An image that stuck with me was
how he kills his little sister and she drops her doll. I shiver to think
this can ever happen to anyone.
THE KID
My
sister rubs the doll's face in mud,
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Analysis of “Interview with a Policeman” by Ai In “Interview with a Policeman,” Ai relates to a policeman and the problems he faces while on the job through vivid imagery in an excellent extended metaphor, by putting him in one of the most controversial scenarios today. The officer first starts off being interviewed by a reporter. He relives the moments where while patrolling the neighborhood, he had to stop a store robbery. A black kid pulls a gun on the store clerk and the policeman engages in a dramatic firefight sequence in the convenience store. Liquor bottles explode as stray bullets ricochet off of them, creating a surreal environment. The way she describes these images make me feel like I am right behind the counter of the convenience store. Ai then reverts back to the reporter scene where she relates the events to the constant re-spawning of crime and how safety is a luxury. The policeman’s fear and the fast pace of the event is conveyed in the following lines: “I only fired when he bent down,/ picked up his gun, and again dropped it./ I saw he was terrified,/ saw his shoulder and head jerk to the side/ as the next bullet hit./ When I dove down he got his gun once more/ and fired wildly./ Liquor poured onto the counter, the floor/ onto which he fell back finally.” In these lines, Ai reveals what goes through the policeman’s mind as his adrenaline overtakes his body, so that when one of the characters fires his weapon, only one will come out alive. “The ape in the gilded cage”, is the kid behind bars, but after him many more will replace him. As the poet takes us into the mind of the policeman as he is forced to possibly take the life of someone, she treats us with the ability to accent the moment by putting it into slow motion by controlling the pacing, allowing her poem to take greater effect emotionally. Ai uses her talents to illustrate what it means to be in a life or death situation seen commonly by policemen, while giving the poem even more depth by using great description at critical points.
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Interview with a Policeman
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