Cary Academy’s own Laura
Renshaw was featured this October in the
News & Observer for her work in the Teen Writer’s Workshop and a poem that
she wrote while working with the program. An experimental extension of the Young
Writer’s Workshop, Teen Writer’s Workshop brings together thirty students
excited about developing their creative communication. Mentored in a week long
summer program, the students work with skilled and motivated teachers in small
group settings. They are able to hear everyone’s work and give words to
seemingly abstruse notions. That’s what Laura did in her poem
Drop the Phone. What would life be
like without the instantaneous communication that phones provide? That’s the
question that Laura asks. Not only does she ask it, but she derogates from what
most of us would say. Read her poem on phones and you may find yourself
switching your off more often that you do now.
By Laura Renshaw
Ring, ring, ring…
Go away, Go away!
Leave me alone.
Go somewhere else to stay.
I’m not answering because I
don’t want to hear.
I want to be alone, even if
you don’t, clear?
Where can I go
To leave the ringing behind
forever?
So, when will I hear it
again?
Never.
What if I lost my phone?
What if everyone else did,
too?
What if the noise went
away?
Would the world be quieter?
Would the world be better?
I can’t wait for that day.
( November 2007 Volume 5, Issue 1 )